Beta Reader

[Emma]

updated 3/10/14

Emma | Illinois | Tumblr-ing

this post helped me with this x

username:
swimswimswim27

what i will look for:
spelling, grammar, word usage, punctuation 

ratings:
anything from k to ma 

fact accuracy:
so if you say something in it about a historical person like Bill Nye not really historical but he's cool and you say he was born in 1955, i'll double check to make sure that's correct if that makes sense

smut:
making sure there is no word usage of using words like boobies, ding dong so forth 

writers block:
i'll try my best to help you with it. i will most probably tell you what questions to ask yourself when you are stuck like go back to the beginning of the story and see if it mentioned anything about the characters past you could relate back to 

plot flow:
make sure the story is staying on topic. using my own story as an example  So let's say they have to find these letters and theres 100 of them but you are going off in another direction, talking about relationships etc. i'll remind you what the story is about, try to redirect you back to the main topic of the story 

location:
since this is on 5sos proboards and you write fanfiction and i'm going to assume it's 5sos, i'll check to make sure if the guys are saying something about their mothers it's mum because they call their moms mum in australia. same with anywhere else. america is mom, england is mum, ireland is mum, australia is mum

rules: 
no stories of rape, physical/ sexual abuse. I am okay with self-harm, death, suicide even though i don't like it i will do those 
i can do anything from one chapter to a whole story 
give me time to do this. i have school and swim team to keep up with if i'm taking a while feel free to pm me and ask if it's going okay

request form 
username: 
link to story:
story length (chapter, one-shot):
story rating and warnings:
do you want me to focus on specific things: 

you can pm me this, respond on here or message me it on tumblr (x)

[Steff:)]

Hi!!! I was wondering if you can help me with my descriptions :( I just think my story sounds immature and all that and I just want it hilarious or something so I was wondering if you can help me with it:)http://5sosfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=55 heres the link



ps. I THINK YOU REVIEWED MY STORIES AT THE TWFANFICTION.COM (im hideandsykes there :) ) just letting you know tho :)



Thankyou xx

[Emma]

OMG I HAVE! I had a mini heart attack when I read that. Im going to try and read it later tonight then see if i can come up with something

[Steff:)]

Okay thank you

[Steff:)]

Aug 19, 2013 5:21:30 GMT Emma said:

OMG I HAVE! I had a mini heart attack when I read that. Im going to try and read it later tonight then see if i can come up with something

you never got back to me

[Emma]

I am so sorry! My life got really busy with school and family issues. I'm planning on getting to it this weekend because I'm free sorry about that

[katia]

hiii I was wondering if you could help me out with my 5SOS story?

[Emma]

updated

[sawyerhemmings]

request form
username: Sawyerhemmings
link to story: so I actually have two that I was hoping you could help with... The first Tsunami Tides: 5sosfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=1564

And the second: I Got Your Six
5sosfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=1601

story length (chapter, one-shot): chapter
story rating and warnings: T for both language, sexual content, alcohol, drugs and death
do you want me to focus on specific things: I'm just having a hard time getting I Got Your Six going so writers block and basically an opinion on the story line. With Tsunami Tides I want to better my third person dialogue and also and opinion on how I can make it better.

Wow sorry that's a lot but if you beta for me that would be amazing.
Xx. Sawyer