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tabitha !! Full Member i walked up a flight of stairs im so out of breath im about to collapse is this normal Posts: 228	how tf do i write a fight scene Jun 27, 2015 20:39:42 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by tabitha !! on Jun 27, 2015 20:39:42 GMT i have a problem . i made the mistake of writing a story that involves lots of fight scenes . and i'm about to write the first one . pls help .
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tabitha !! Full Member i walked up a flight of stairs im so out of breath im about to collapse is this normal Posts: 228	how tf do i write a fight scene Jun 29, 2015 15:16:03 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by tabitha !! on Jun 29, 2015 15:16:03 GMT wow guise !!! thnx fore tha helppp !!!!
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how tf do i write a fight scene Jul 1, 2015 12:52:02 GMT tabitha !! likes this

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Jun 27, 2015 20:39:42 GMT tabitha !! said:

i have a problem .

i made the mistake of writing a story that involves lots of fight scenes .

and i'm about to write the first one .

pls help .

Hi! I wrote one the other for a one shot and it was truly difficult to do so. I'll leave you the link so that you can see it: 5sosfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=1825&chapter=2
Other than that, just don't use many adjectives. Try to find many verbs that mean the same so that you don't use words like "punched" many times.
If this is for your Avengers story i would suggest that you kind of summarised the fight, at least just for this time. With practise this will start coming out easily

i really want to see what you came up with. I love that story

hope this was somewhat helpful,

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Jul 1, 2015 12:52:02 GMT marianalovesluke said:

Jun 27, 2015 20:39:42 GMT tabitha !! said:

i have a problem .

i made the mistake of writing a story that involves lots of fight scenes .

and i'm about to write the first one .

pls help .

i really want to see what you came up with. I love that story

hope this was somewhat helpful,

Mariana Xx

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how tf do i write a fight scene Jul 5, 2015 11:43:28 GMT tabitha !! likes this

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Post by seeingred on Jul 5, 2015 11:43:28 GMT

Doubt you still need any help with this but I suppose you could just watch fight scenes in movies that will be similar to what you want to write - like a superhero movie hehe - and just try and imagine your characters in that position in the scene? I agree with the whole don't use words over and over like punch and hit etc, just let it flow and see what comes natural I suppose. I need to write fight scenes in certain fics too so I'm in the same boat haha, same goes for smut for me but we'll see how things go xD

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Jul 3, 2015 20:40:58 GMT tabitha !! said:

Jul 1, 2015 12:52:02 GMT marianalovesluke said:

i really want to see what you came up with. I love that story

hope this was somewhat helpful,

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