Review Store [Currently Open]

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I'm a bit new to the site and while I've been on the fanfiction site, for like, YEARS now. I've never actually read a lot of the stories that're posted on there, I've just posted my own.



So in light of the fact that this site is one of my favorites and clearing dying out, I'm opening up this store in hopes to get it alive again. There's no catch or gimmick and I'm not working for any admins. This is something I like doing (I have two other sites I'm on and both have a store like this.)





The only thing I ask for is that you comment on a board somewhere:



Need a new cover? We have plenty of those available! Ask away in the posts below the thread.



Wanna talk? Our general discussion board is still open to anyone looking to vent about daily life.



Need some assistance on how things work? We have a thread for that, too!





Get the boards buzzing people, one person/comment/click can make a difference on sites like this. If you find you like it, tell your 5SOS obsessed friends about it. I mean hell, they'll probably have their own stories they want read, right?





Form:



Title:

Username(on the fanfiction site):

Small Summary:

Boy(s)-who am I reading about?:





That's about it! Leave me your stories down below and I will rate/review each chapter I read. When I'm through, I will make a post under this giving a rating and my final thoughts for others to see. Now get out of my grill, this is my barbecue.
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[brynnisbrave]

Hi I think it's great that you're trying to jump start the 5sos writer's community. If you want you could read my story. It's a Luke AU. I just posted the first chapter on tumblr. Here's a link x

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Apr 6, 2017 20:46:29 GMT brynnisbrave said:

Hi I think it's great that you're trying to jump start the 5sos writer's community. If you want you could read my story. It's a Luke AU. I just posted the first chapter on tumblr. Here's a link x

Awesome! I'll give it a look over when I have more time later, don't forget to post somewhere! 

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Apr 6, 2017 20:46:29 GMT brynnisbrave said:

Hi I think it's great that you're trying to jump start the 5sos writer's community. If you want you could read my story. It's a Luke AU. I just posted the first chapter on tumblr. Here's a link x

Hey Bry!

Okay, so I finished your chapter tonight and am following through on my review. You are being rewarded with my Happy Review Stars !! (Insert semi cheesy fanfare music.)

This is only one chapter but I'm in love with it and hope you continue writing it. Your writing is phenomenal and makes me feel like I'm reading an actual published story, opposed to fan fiction. Your word choices suite the context being written and give Arwen a grown feel. She is by far my favorite character aside from Rory, but at times he does frighten me a bit with his overly ecstatic nature. Nothing wrong with that of course, just very intimidating for an introvert. xD

I absolutely loove the way you describe things and people. Between the details of laugh lines, the larger than normal ears and a deep, rolling voice...I could see it all and it made me become a part of your story. You give vivid descriptions so that we see exactly what you do, but not overpower us so that every descriptive word loses meaning. This is truly a gift and I hope you cherish it.

The only downfall of the entire chapter would have to be the length, (which we discussed) and you're missing a word here or there as you go along. It would be wise to reread your work as well considering you could do with a few commas in certain places and shorten some of your longer sentences. (A normal sentence is 20-30 words before it's considered a run on.) There was also a word or two that should've been something else than what was written.

But these are all grammatical and can be fixed! There is nothing wrong plot wise or character wise and I am so excited to read more. Do post your next chapter soon so I am not left waiting long. 

Thanks for letting me review your story! Don't forget to comment on the site somewhere as payment! 

[brynnisbrave]

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my first chapter! It was a glowing review and your advice is constructive. It's actually given me a much needed boost of confidence and I can't thank you enough for it. I'll make sure to consider the suggestions you gave me when working on my next chapter. And again thank you

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No problem! Glad I could be of help :-)

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This is still open!